I can't take it anymore.
Minutes pass by, uncountable times,
I'm craving for your company,
Seamless, I want the borders to be,
Seeing you soon, has become my only fantasy.
You aren't near..but I know you ain't far,
One of these days, I'm gonna reach you, wherever you are,
Until then, I lie down, counting the stars, and missing you, the brightest and the most far..
8 comments:
You aren't near but i know you aint far...nice line
Pleasant read.
:)
thnx a ton :)
this is so beautiful! simple wala beautiful!
thank you *bows*
:P
A delightful read! And, this one is kisses the poetry section too! Keep writing!!!
@ Brosreview
YAY! I thought isme bhi kuch betterment chahiye hoga. lol :D
u rock! :) :)
thankss!
Nice!Really pleasant and wonderful poem!
thanku :) :D :*
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